» Comics - ch1 - 6 - August 9th, 2009, 6:39 pm

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Shamdu, August 9th, 2009, 6:42 pm ( Reply )

- Yeah, school uniforms... Very plain ones though.

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Smackity ( Reply )

The teacher looks like she's about to pop. That, or grab a ruler.

posted by Gracifer on August 10th, 2009, 12:46 am





 
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SMIRKING. <3

posted by Haikku on August 10th, 2009, 3:56 am





 
Skrt ( Reply )

(That's pronounced skritt)

Wow. Looking at this page, then going back to Ch1- page 1, the difference (and, obviously, the improvement) in amazing. It really is. This page is beautiful in my (admittedly twisted and skewed) opinion. The teacher's expression portrays her anger and indignation perfectly, as well as making her out to be this evil old hag. And then Ren and the other characters and the backgrounds are all so much more realistic compared to before. Oh course, the dialogue on this page is a great improvement to your original page as well. Like I said, the improvement truly blows me away.

posted by xXTheMadHatterXx on August 10th, 2009, 4:03 am





 
She's here! ( Reply )

I've missed her! She's looking fabulous, as usual.

Ah, the wrinkles...Fabulous page, as always!

posted by The DayDreaming on August 10th, 2009, 3:00 pm





 
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I love his expression in the second to last panel, haha. So menacing. And uh, you're in the last panel is spelled right, which I'm sure you're aware of already.

You're = You are; If it's being used this way, it's right. c: SORRY. GRAMMAR NAZI.

posted by sovietbitch on August 11th, 2009, 6:40 pm





 
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I simply adore the last two panels (:
and please don't tell me
that I'm the only one who was reminded of the grinch from the last panel?

posted by Afm_Zero on August 14th, 2009, 9:26 am





 
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@Afm_Zero> THAT'S who it was! I knew he looked like something I'd seen before.

Excellent, excellent. :}

posted by Avengeli on August 15th, 2009, 7:45 pm





 
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haha, ok. I was hoping I wasn't the only one

posted by Afm_Zero on August 29th, 2009, 9:02 am



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