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Shamdu, August 2nd, 2009, 6:04 pm ( Reply )

- I wasn't so sure about the monologue in this page... Which is why I kinda stalled with it. It still sounds awkward though. :(

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3rd panel is HOOOOT.

posted by Crimson_Fire on August 2nd, 2009, 7:15 pm





 
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you.ve really improved
i reread the comic and your art slowly evolves as it reaches the more recent pages. props.

posted by d u s k y on August 2nd, 2009, 8:03 pm





 
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also ren is hot in panel three.

posted by d u s k y on August 2nd, 2009, 8:04 pm





 
No no no ( Reply )

Take your shirt off again, or keep it over your head, or something!

Ren, you tease...

Also, you draw the most gorgeous backgrounds, has anyone ever told you? I'm sure they have. But, they're truly brilliant, so it's always worth mentioning.

posted by The DayDreaming on August 2nd, 2009, 9:12 pm





 
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Mediocre just doesn't sound like a word the old Ren would use.

83 The new Ren seems less giddy and full of child like joy.
8D He's disgusted with the boring, horribly average life that surrounds him (and that is stifling his own not average-ness).

I think the monologue is just fine. =3

posted by Neko with a Katana on August 2nd, 2009, 11:20 pm





 
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I love his tummy :3

Tis so cute ^_^

posted by wo_chi_baozi on August 3rd, 2009, 1:06 pm





 
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OMG! i wanna live there. Everything you do is so detailed. Love it!

posted by shadowfoxx on August 3rd, 2009, 1:59 pm



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WOW i love your comic its so cool!! XD

posted by Aosa Loso on August 3rd, 2009, 6:16 pm





 
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Noo! We want to see more almost-nekkid Ren!

Although Ren looking as lovely as you normally draw him is good too.

posted by The White Blacksmith on August 4th, 2009, 3:56 pm





 
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Yum. And panel five is fantastic. Keep it up!

posted by Gracifer on August 4th, 2009, 5:35 pm



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