Yay art school. Yay dorm internet issues. Story of my life!

edit: ALSO god your art has improved so much and it was already fantastic. <3

posted by cebe on 18 Oct 2009 03:06 pm

Ohgosh your art is so much better and it was good originally!

posted by Flore on 18 Oct 2009 03:41 pm

Ahaa I love that fourth panel. Ren's got such an eeeevil devious face. :>

posted by RadicalTrain on 18 Oct 2009 07:40 pm

I love their insane mouths, they're so terrifically expressive- ie, Ren's so sneeeeeaky it's painful. :'D

posted by Frigandier on 18 Oct 2009 10:45 pm

the art of the redo is more contrived than the original and it has a less "real" feel to it, and the characters and changes to the plot are more hackneyed not less. This is NOT an improvement. Slice off the last chunk of pages and continue from where you left off.

posted by Line Noise (Guest) on 12 Dec 2009 05:46 pm

hehe, Woman in the last panel looks like the grinch XD

I dunno, in my opinion there isn't really any need for a redo of any of the comic, but these pages are still great, so I'm happy if you are :)

posted by SKitFox on 30 Jan 2010 11:30 am